Writing for love is a pas

You make me want to kiss you, until the end of day. You make me want to hold you, on the beach, watching the sun's ray. When you touch my ...

I thought it was really deep. I liked how you explained how we are killing earth. I also liked how you compared earth to a dream. NICE WORK.

Sometimes, When I look upon a spider I think of you. You, In all your deadly beauty, Master of your universe. Your web, A glittering galaxy, Abound in constellations. And ...

I really liked it. Like tennisprincess said, the passion was great. Please, keep writing.

I liked the purpose of the story, but I'm a little confused. Why is the cat counting by one-thosands?

wow. i loved the 4th stanza, it really got to me. everyone has really found everything else, so i just want to congratulate you, because that was a REALLY GOOD ...

I know. When I repeat three steps ahead over and over again, it got on my nerves, but then I took them all out, and it didn't make any sense. ...

I'm sorry, but this is just my opinion. Don't take offense. I though it was horrible. I couldn't catch the flow OR the rhthym. :smt102

See it from my point of view… Every time I get a step closer to you, You get ahead three steps ahead of me. Whatever you choose, I will choose, ...

I really liked the flow and the descriptivness of this. It's awesome!

Thanks =]

I got confused. It sounds like you were talking about something else besides pears.

I like it. Personaly, I would want to fight Jet Li and Jackie Chan at the same time. :smt027 I liked the plot of the poem. The rhythm was good ...

You are a very deep writer. I like it.Oh yeah, welcome to YWS. have fun, and i enjoyed your poem!

Shank you very much! :smt041